Saturday, July 31, 2010

Painful Love



For me, you were the only one.
for  you, I was one of them.

I loved you with all my soul
and you did'nt even bother to care.

I proved my love again and again,
what I got in return was suffering and pain.

I know you hurt me, yet I could'nt stop loving you,
and you were unaware, lost in your ignorance.

I was there waiting for you, hoping you would return,
but you did not even care to turn.

Its now, that I know I have to move ahead.
Its painful to the core, but I learnt more..

15 comments:

Pooja Majage said...

m going to show this poem to one of my frnd for sure.... mast likhi hai...

Anonymous said...

Awesome... every line is such a mirror image of a broken heart... .. <3 <3 ... !!!!

Waise i will sing this song >>> Dil cheez kyaa hai aap meri jaan lijiyeee .... :P :P :P :P ...

Aastha said...

Beautifully crafted,Intensely moving..!!

Nea said...

Well written, especially if it's experiential. I would have personally loved to have it stopped before the last two lines since they are pretty abrupt in a certain way. Over all, I loved the intensity!

jyutika said...

the feelings are excellently expressed... awesome! i simply liked it...

mMS said...

liked it! ..dint want it 2 end so soon!!!

prajakta said...

I was there waiting for you, hoping you would return
but you did not even care to turn

r the best lines, part from this i would like to enjoy the pain more than the hope

Mansing said...

Awesome D ... i still dont believe u wrote it... known u for so long( since i was born) but still i never knew u could write poems.... proud of u...try something happy

poorva said...

ujju... mala mahit nai 2 poems lihites.... gr8..... classic poem ahe... i even went through ur dad's blogs.... its amazing....

Anonymous said...

Hey u right well.....I liked your blog a lot...rather i do visit ur blog once a while....keep writing...God Bless U !!

Sanjay said...

Ujwala!

I must say this is too awesome to take. i love every single letter, word, phrase and everything.

Can relate to my current state of being!

I read it and read it and again read it :D

Appears to me as if you can see what I feel.

Great work.

Cheers
Sanjay
@sanz4u on twitter

ujwala said...

Thanks for the all the wonderful comments.They mean a lot :)

Rohini M K said...

"Its now, that I know I have to move ahead.

Its painful to the core, but I learnt more.."

Pain leaves two things with us when it leaves. Strength and Wisdom.
Nice post!! very vivid.. :)

Abhinav Chandel said...

This one's really nice. Great work.

Deepti Sarnaik said...

:) Love u