For me, you were the only one.
for you, I was one of them.
I loved you with all my soul
and you did'nt even bother to care.
I proved my love again and again,
what I got in return was suffering and pain.
I know you hurt me, yet I could'nt stop loving you,
and you were unaware, lost in your ignorance.
I was there waiting for you, hoping you would return,
but you did not even care to turn.
Its now, that I know I have to move ahead.
Its painful to the core, but I learnt more..
15 comments:
m going to show this poem to one of my frnd for sure.... mast likhi hai...
Awesome... every line is such a mirror image of a broken heart... .. <3 <3 ... !!!!
Waise i will sing this song >>> Dil cheez kyaa hai aap meri jaan lijiyeee .... :P :P :P :P ...
Beautifully crafted,Intensely moving..!!
Well written, especially if it's experiential. I would have personally loved to have it stopped before the last two lines since they are pretty abrupt in a certain way. Over all, I loved the intensity!
the feelings are excellently expressed... awesome! i simply liked it...
liked it! ..dint want it 2 end so soon!!!
I was there waiting for you, hoping you would return
but you did not even care to turn
r the best lines, part from this i would like to enjoy the pain more than the hope
Awesome D ... i still dont believe u wrote it... known u for so long( since i was born) but still i never knew u could write poems.... proud of u...try something happy
ujju... mala mahit nai 2 poems lihites.... gr8..... classic poem ahe... i even went through ur dad's blogs.... its amazing....
Hey u right well.....I liked your blog a lot...rather i do visit ur blog once a while....keep writing...God Bless U !!
Ujwala!
I must say this is too awesome to take. i love every single letter, word, phrase and everything.
Can relate to my current state of being!
I read it and read it and again read it :D
Appears to me as if you can see what I feel.
Great work.
Cheers
Sanjay
@sanz4u on twitter
Thanks for the all the wonderful comments.They mean a lot :)
"Its now, that I know I have to move ahead.
Its painful to the core, but I learnt more.."
Pain leaves two things with us when it leaves. Strength and Wisdom.
Nice post!! very vivid.. :)
This one's really nice. Great work.
:) Love u
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